act i of the story is complete! thank you to everyone who has been reading and following along so far, much appreciated ❤️
act ii will feature some interesting content. it's been a bit of a slow burn but i promise y'all will see more interactions between the two most important characters in the story, i just needed to set things up lol
i swear i be sittin in my room writing the story like this:
this is optional, but i wanted to get some general feedback on the story so far, just so i can gauge the level of interest:overall interest thus far?
pacing and flow of story - does it make sense and flow logically?
do the characters seem believable?
level of immersion - can you imagine/visualize scenes, actions, etc. through the narrative and dialogue?
other (fun) questions:
favorite character(s) so far?
favorite scene/chapter?
(excluding the two main characters) any character(s) or relationship dynamics you hope get more time in the spotlight, even if they have not yet appeared in the story?
theories and/or predictions? 👀
again thanks everyone, i will be updating the story soon ✌🏾
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renaissance || beyonce • aaliyah
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