[temp] info/feedback - act i

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act i of the story is complete! thank you to everyone who has been reading and following along so far, much appreciated ❤️

act ii will feature some interesting content. it's been a bit of a slow burn but i promise y'all will see more interactions between the two most important characters in the story, i just needed to set things up lol

i swear i be sittin in my room writing the story like this:

this is optional, but i wanted to get some general feedback on the story so far, just so i can gauge the level of interest:

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this is optional, but i wanted to get some general feedback on the story so far, just so i can gauge the level of interest:

overall interest thus far?

pacing and flow of story - does it make sense and flow logically?

do the characters seem believable?

level of immersion - can you imagine/visualize scenes, actions, etc. through the narrative and dialogue?

other (fun) questions:

favorite character(s) so far?

favorite scene/chapter?

(excluding the two main characters) any character(s) or relationship dynamics you hope get more time in the spotlight, even if they have not yet appeared in the story?

theories and/or predictions? 👀


again thanks everyone, i will be updating the story soon ✌🏾

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